it is important to keep your old friends than to make new friends
Friends have an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to establish a strong bond for our large social network to instill the concrete basis of the social skills. Moreover, they are the guiding light that helps us to fulfill our goals because they improve our personalities and guide us to a success. However, I believe that the person must have as many friends as possible with the old ones due to its benefits in both terms of enhancing the communication skills and preserve the mental health. The explanations go as follows.
First, the individuals should have a myriad amount of friends because this will aid them to refine their interpersonal skill because new friendships will aid them to learn how to deal effectively with people and that will reflect positively on their suture workflow and productivity. Indeed, in order to have these abilities, they must interact with many people from diverse spheres during their lives. For example, I lived in the middle east with my family, then I traveled to the United States to continue my study, when I arrives here, I faced a verity of obstacles, since, it is new culture with high diversity, thus, I had nostalgia whem I am far from my family and I was unable to contact my friends to help me in this situation, so, that what encouraged me to meet new friends and created new friendships, moreover, those new peers assisted me in learnig me how to cooperate efficently and collaborate effectively, thus, such a collaborative environment enhanced my communication skills immensely. Consequently, friends are important to build up the base of people social relationships.
Second, people must improve the rapport relationships with their friends as they have an indelible role in improving the psychology status of them because, as we all know, engaging in a conversation with friends will enhance our mood dramatically. In fact, they are imperative for their well-being alongside welfare. For example, my friends always spice up my life and especially when I am stressed because they add jokes that help me to quell away the stress and built up a tension of my stressful life which, in turn, this has a great influence on my mood. In conclusion, to have optimal welfare, people should have many friends in every part of their lives to protect their mental health.
To sum up, we should open the proximity to have as many friends as possible because their role is imperative and essential in establishing a profound base of the interpersonal relationships and maintain our health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'arrive'
Suggestion: arrive
...ted States to continue my study, when I arrives here, I faced a verity of obstacles, si...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people social relationships. Second, people must improve the rapport relation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9099045289 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506944444444 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.305409617 48.9658058833 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.642857143 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184889561953 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688391631656 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056144787121 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114393869345 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033216418654 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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