using books or electronic resources
Knowledge has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to enrich our mind with it, so that we can guide our nation to progress. Moreover, there many resources that people used to gain a beneficial knowledge from, such as physically printed books or the internet. However, I believe that the electronic way has been used nowadays more than the traditional one which the paper-based due to its benefits in both of improving the informational level and enhance people way of life. the explanations go as follows.
To begin with, the technology has a revolutionary impact on our communities because it has a spectacular breakthrough many spheres, such as education and medicine. Indeed, the new innovations facilitate people tasks and refine their interdisciplinary development by providing people an easy and affordable way to gain a beneficial information. For instance, three years ago, my professor asked me to conduct a research in only two weeks in order to graduate, thus, instead of going to a library or book store, I used the internet because it endowed me with all the ideas and concepts that I really need to be familiar with to continue my project in a short period of time, just by using my computer and browsing through many websites that were fill with a myriad amount of free books that made my research full of a verity of knowledge which, in turn, this created a good impression about me from my teacher because I finished my research in a most orderly and timely fashion. Consequently, carving out the knowledge from the electronic resource consider a sufficient way to perfect one a lot.
Second, work takes most of the people's time because they tend to work overtime in order to secure their future lives and improve their living standard. Indeed, most of them they study and work at the same time in order to be a highly educated person because this will offer them a good opportunity for a future job. For example, I worked eight hours a day and I need to continue my education because most of the job's requirements ask for a highly educated person with a good experience because it is the stigma to weigh people at work, so, attending school will provide me respectful and reputation position in the future, thus, I used to attend online classes rather than go to school because I do not have time as the school hours are not flexible like the online ones. Therefore, this way assisted me and surged me to grasp the knowledge in a way that suits my life. In contrast, If I chose to use a paper book, that is mean, I have to leave my work earlier in order to arrive at the learning institutes or the library. So, harvesting the knowledge by utilizing the online way have a great influence on our lives.
To sum up, I can not oversee that the internet has many disadvantages but the pros overweigh the cons. Hopefully, people will eagerly seek to be up to date with the new technology and harvest information through it
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'beneficial knowledge'.
Suggestion: beneficial knowledge
...many resources that people used to gain a beneficial knowledge from, such as physically printed books ...
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Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...l level and enhance people way of life. the explanations go as follows. To begi...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...s ago, my professor asked me to conduct a research in only two weeks in order to graduate,...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... with to continue my project in a short period of time, just by using my computer and browsing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70801526718 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7825258629 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.613289362 48.9658058833 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.117647059 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8235294118 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158986612698 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487698546071 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790723677779 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101093582698 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799934168699 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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