short vacations or long vacations
Vacations have an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to take time off from our chores and tasks by conducting a journey to get relaxed and improve our mental health because it assists us to get rid of the stress and built up the tension of our stressful life. However, I personally prefer to have many short vacations rather than only a long one due to its benefits in both of building our interpersonal skills and widen our perspective in life. The explanations go as follows.
To begin with, successful people are those who can handle and enjoy the social relationships because this will help them to live comfortably. Indeed, it is essential to instill the concrete basis of social skills as they are the guiding light to fulfill their goal in the future. Moreover, this can happen by traveling to a vast array of places and create new friendships by interacting and communicating with a wide range of people from diverse spheres. For instance, three years ago, I had five short vacations, I spent them in visiting five new cities, thus, I met new dwellers and I established a strong bond for my large social network because I learned how to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively with inhabitants from different cultures. So, such a collaborative environment enhanced my communication skills immensely which, in turn, reflected positively on my future work productivity. Consequently, having the opportunity to have many vacations for distinct places has a great impact on our interpersonal skills.
Second, people and especially the labors need to enrich their mind frequently with new information and knowledge because this will aid to guide our nation to progress. In fact, being involved with people have different background will help to improve their information. For example, as I said, I conducted tours to Five cities, so, I learned about each one of them the basic history and many handy tips about their cultures, as a result, that what broaden my horizon and assist me to thrive easily in the community. In addition, this new acknowledgment refined my experience and my perspective development because that had a great influence on my ability to work by engaging the myriad amount of information within my work and that led stunning annual profits, since, my job depends on the international relation because I used to work in a flight company. In conclusion, people should eagerly seek to carve out new high knowledge about a verity of new places to sharpen their experience and their intellectual ability, they can have that by traveling for many locations for a short time to know about their cultures.
To sum up, it is crucial that all population travel to visit new communities in the same year, because this will aid them to improve their learning abilities and their social skills which have a positive impact on their personality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01234567901 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92285091319 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520576131687 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.540538231 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.25 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917352861996 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382081823524 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725111972462 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617291882984 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678878057453 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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