space exploration or space travel
Learning about the space has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is utterly important to follow it and stay updated with it because this will lead to broaden our horizon and aid us to solve many puzzled concerns about this mystery issue. However, this field requires a lot of money that may cause government financial trouble. Therefore, If I have to choose between the space travel and space exploration, I would choose the space exploration because it needs less fund than a travel and due to its benefits in both terms of enhancing the informational ability and improve social skills. The explanations go as follows.
To begin with, astronomical students need to sharpen their information through conducting researches and then apply what they will learn in guiding an exploration because this will help them to refine their intellectual abilities. Indeed, they have the required facilities because they can do that by using the available pieces of equipment such as the new technological innovations like computers and radars in achieving their goals and widen their knowledge. For instance, my friend, who is astronomy major, he did a project with his peers about Mars and its water content, they used the college labrotory in order to continue their work, in addition, they were tempted to employ the internet to gain the information they need with low price because, as we all know, the world wide net deemed as a leap in the information technology that provides a myriad amount of information in an easy and accessible manner, thus, that aided them to finish their work in a most orderly and timely fashion. As a result, that assisted to guide that field toward progress because they endowed their university a great achievement and that had a great influence on the college revenue because their work attracted more students to apply for their school. Moreover, they did not waste the money in tempting to reach the space by guiding a journey because this need about billion dollars to build a space station and other stuff. Consequently, it is wise to consume the money for exploration rather than the travel because it consumes less money and helps to improve the educational level.
Second, being involved in such a work need the student to work as a group to fulfill their goals. In fact, they will with each other effectively because that what will guide them to a success because they will improve their social skills. For example, the teamwork base helps to learn the students how to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively, thus, such a collaborative environment enhances their communications skills immensely which will reflect positively on their future workflow and productivity. In contrast, traveling to space will not provide them this opportunity because it will not offer jus only one or two persons to travel. So, they will lose such a skill. In conclusion, it is vital to spend the government money on something will worth that such as the exploration because it will surge the students to work as a team and that what enhance their interpersonal skills.
To sum up, education always considers as a cornerstone of the community, thus the students should eagerly seek to widen it in all the fields including space because it is the light that will guide our nation toward progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 775, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... low price because, as we all know, the world wide net deemed as a leap in the information...
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Line 3, column 775, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... low price because, as we all know, the world wide net deemed as a leap in the information...
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Line 3, column 1357, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...iding a journey because this need about billion dollars to build a space station and ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2797.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00357781753 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73901853501 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502683363148 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 862.2 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.903728465 48.9658058833 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.388888889 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0555555556 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194138336952 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772971779112 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122613851209 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155555369299 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100900050172 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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