childhood time
The childhood period has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to enjoy this period without leaving anything regrettable in this valuable age. Moreover, in this time, the children learn myriad lessons that will assist them to guide our nation toward progress as they are the pillars and the powers of the communities. Therefore, I believe that kids ' life is the most pleasure period due to its benefits in both of improving the communication skills and enhance the educational level. The following explanation goes as follows.
First, children begin to establish a strong bond for their large social network from an early age in order to instill the concrete basis of the social skills which have a positive impact on their future personalities and their dreams fulfillment. Indeed, these skills have a great influence on their future jobs. For instance, when I was seven years old, my father surged me to communicate with people from diverse spheres, thus, I met many friends and created a vast array of relationships, So, my father's advice provided me with a great opportunity be helping me to be able to deal effectively with my peers, cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively. Thus, such a collaborative environment enhanced my communication skills immensely which had an imperative impact on my future workflow and productivity. In contrast, kids who did not use to learn these skills, they will suffer a lot because they such skills and they will be unable to learn them at an old age. Consequently, children enjoy their lives by building up a profound base of their interpersonal skills.
Second, children are fascinated and obsessed to be up to date with the new technological innovations such as the smartphones or laptops. In fact, they have more leisure time than those who are younger than them such as their parents who have long commutes on regular basis. For example, I used to employ my gadgets at my free time and get entertained by playing video games or watching movies, in addition, I can communicate with my peers by emails or the social media which will, in turn, helps to improve my mental health by getting rid of the stress and built up a tension of my study life. On the other hand, my parents can not squander their time by utilizing their devices as they do not have extra time for that. In conclusion, childhood is a perfect period of time to get fun due to the availability of time.
To sum up, childhood is a valuable time in people's lives because the can establish a strong base of their interpersonal skills and enjoy their time with technology advancements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84947558528 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524444444444 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7101267963 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.705882353 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4705882353 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8823529412 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196962463661 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805377892395 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133892036273 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173689120641 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12411988736 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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