reduce friend economy problem
The economy has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to work hard in order to fulfill our principle necessities of live such as water, food and shelter, in addition, secure our future lives and improve our living standard. However, as a student, we have a tight budget, unable to work full time because we are busy with study. Thus, I believe that the best way to help my friend economically is by living with a roommate due to its benefits in both of reducing the financial burden and enhance the social skills that have a great influence on my friend future job. The following explanations go as follows.
To begin with, students' lives are fill with many commitments such as studying, taking exams, or conducting researches because these are deemed the lighting guide to help them achieve their goals and continue their studying way. Indeed, they need money in order to begin with this process as soon as possible, so, they have to learn how to manage their priorities and not squander their money. For instance, five years ago, when I was at the university, I used to work in a library as a part-time job. However, the salary was not sufficient to complete all my needs, thus, I asked my friend to live with him in the same appartment, so that, this will reduce the financial burden on me because the rent would split on two persons, in addition, we paid the bills together. Thus, that what assisted me to save money and used it to buy cirricullum stuff. Therefore, sharing home with people will aid us to reduce wasting our wages and improve our economic issue.
Second, social skills have a great impact on students personalities because they will learn how to adapte and communicate with people and this have a great implication on their future work outcome. In fact, sharing place of living with others will help to enhance these skills and establish a strong bond for their large socail interpersonal relationships. For example, during university life, I lived with a roommate, he was from other cultures and had a different mother tongue, he endowed me with a myriad amount of information about the people of his country, and he taught me how to deal with other people because he had a master in social communications, thus, I learned how to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively. So, such a collaborative environment enhance my interpersonal relationships immensely which had a positive impact on my future workflow and productivity and gave me an opportunity to gain a lucrative salary because the ability to deal effectively with my peers reflect a good impression about me, as a result, my manager offered a promotion for me with a respectful position. So, in order to refine the personal economy , it is critical to interact with people because this will enhance the sociel skills that have a positive impact on the future work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... we have a tight budget, unable to work full time because we are busy with study. Thus, I...
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Line 4, column 619, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me how to deal with other people because he had a master in social communications...
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Line 4, column 1156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in order to refine the personal economy , it is critical to interact with people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83734939759 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77632872202 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497991967871 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.1672004524 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5625 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074409751473 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305454625252 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495918351976 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065809636981 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433012808612 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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