Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
Children have an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to start educating them from an early age because this can reflect positively on their future personalities and they will be able to guide our nation toward progress as they are deemed as the pillars and the power for their communities. Therefore, I believe that learning them a new language other than their native one, is essential due to its benefits in both terms of improving their communication skills and enhance their educational level. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my opinion more clearly.
To begin with, it is vital to establish a strong bond for our children's large social network to create a solid foundation of social skills. Indeed, they will have the aptitude to do so through speaking different languages that will assist them to interact and communicate easily with different people from diverse spheres. For instance, My little brother studied in the united states, at the school, they used to learn him three languages beside the English one, so, that what aid him to deal effectively with people surrounding them which are from different countries with different mother languages because, as we all know, us have diversity of cultures, moreover, that provided my brother the capability to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively, thus, such a collaborative environment enhanced his communication skills immensely which reflected positively on his future workflow and productivity. On the other hand, those schools that do not surge their students to have knowledge about other's languages, they will suffer a lot because they lack such a skills and that will have a bad impact on their upcoming work outcome. Consequently, the teachers must eagerly seek to advocate their students to carve out myriad amount of information about more than one languages because this will help to instill the concrete basis of the interpersonal relationships.
Second, it is critical to widen our children horizon because this will lead to enhancing their intellectual abilities and will help them to achieve their dreams and fulfill their goals at a fast pace. In fact, being involved in many language's courses will aid them to gain information that they were not familiar with and has a potential influence on their perspective which will help them to thrive easily in the community. For example, most of the job's requirements ask for a highly educated person that speaks a verity of languages, so, attending schools that endow them with language's classes will help them to grasp the knowledge and improve their experience which will, in turn, offer for them a vast array of a reputation and respected opportunities that will lead to secure their future lives. In contrast, people who do not use to learn more and improve their skills, they will suffer a lot because they will have limited information. In conclusion, more languages mean more money, thus, in order to have a well-paid profession, people must harvest more knowledge about different languages.
To sum up, it is crucial to enrich our mind with new other languages because always education considers as a cornerstone of the communities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1271, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one language', 'a language', or simply 'languages'?
Suggestion: one language; a language; languages
...d amount of information about more than one languages because this will help to instill the c...
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Line 5, column 835, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e lives. In contrast, people who do not use to learn more and improve their skills,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2713.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17748091603 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83330755372 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507633587786 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 839.7 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.083971795 48.9658058833 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.866666667 100.406767564 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9333333333 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 5.45110844103 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140397493411 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575471252622 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305188978315 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933087273517 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343120384305 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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