It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
The people have many various types of friends in their life. Sometimes they can be good friends or bad friends. Also, they can be kept friendship long term or short term. Personally, I believe that it is important to keep our old friends than make new friends. I feels this way two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I feel old friends mean they have long term friendship with us. That is mean they know us very well than new friends. Therefore, we can believe old friends. Thus, we know he or she is which type of friend, whether we can tell our things or not. So, we can share our personal things with them. But we can’t share our personal things with new friends. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I had some personal problem. So, I discuss with my close old friend. Then, she give solution to me. An also, she didn’t tell about it to anyone. Till now she keeps my trust.
Secondly, old friends are love so much to us. Actually, old friendship keep long term means they love each of them. Old friends have good memories in their friendship. It is important to improve their friendship. Also, they help each of them in their friendship time. These all make more love to each of them. The old friend has good understand about his or her friend. But new friends don’t know much about us. Sometimes they don’t understand the other friend’s situation. For instance, my school friends make arrangement to meet all. I also , agree to that. But I had to do my personal work and I couldn’t meet them. But they didn’t get angry with me. Because they love me and they understand my situation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that old friends are better than make new friends. This because trust and understand make more lovely old friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...ur old friends than make new friends. I feels this way two main reasons, which I will...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
... I feel old friends mean they have long term friendship with us. That is mean they k...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...uss with my close old friend. Then, she give solution to me. An also, she didn'...
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Line 9, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nds make arrangement to meet all. I also , agree to that. But I had to do my perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67076923077 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53608271418 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467692307692 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.1344086022 45% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.8253601934 48.9658058833 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.0 100.406767564 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.84848484848 20.6045352989 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8709677419 227% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357610331583 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102882546956 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130628760443 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29301325289 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117236071034 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 11.7677419355 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 58.1214874552 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.1575268817 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.33 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.73 8.01818996416 71% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.0537634409 56% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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