Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this global world most of the products make many advertisment according to different age groups. Most of the industies which were sell products showing much better qualities. Personally, I agree with the statment which says most adevertisments make products seem much better than they really are. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, Most of advertisments show lots of benifits which is not there inreally. But most of the buyers trust these advertisments and go in to buy the products. But after buying products get to know there no that much enough benifits and waste time and money. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I watching the television I saw one of the adevertisment about instant rice. In their advertisment show that easy rice is so testy and easy to cook. Then I like feel try it. I bought that product and try to cook it. After cooked that easy rice, it horrible to eat. It like watery. there no vegetables and only carats. Afterthat, again I cooked it using my ingredients and make it testy. Therefore, I waste my time and money by watching misleading advertisement.
Secondly, most products are show with colorfuly,which of them are more durable. But when people buy the product and while using get to know it not much durable. For instance, One of my friend by laptop which was display in television. It showed one year grantiperiod also giving these kind of laptops. This laptop broken after one year. Then she took it to make in thier workshop. Onthat time they told these laptops are not that much durable.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that many davertisment tell lie and show much better than they really are.This is because of it waste our time, money and they are not much durable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76282051282 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68918469665 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2241839629 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.44 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.48 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258784937053 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645329022875 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750455785078 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17142130968 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956819219031 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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