It is more important to keep your old friends or to make new friends
There are obviously both positive and negative aspects concerning whether keeping old friends is more important than making new friends. If I were to choose, I would prefer making new friends. It is my firm belief that making new friends is really important for a few reasons, which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I feel that making new friends will help grow your connections. In today's world having connections in the right place is really important. Having good connections will eventually open up new opportunities for you. I have to say this opinion of mine has been influenced by my own personal experience. I remember when I left my native place and go to another city for my undergrad, I met some really interesting people in college. As my college was really renowned all over the country, students came to study in this college from various other states. Now, after graduation I have connections in almost every state in India, and all are placed in top companies. Due to this, I was able to get a refferal for my younger brother in facebook. This is why I feel making new friends is important.
Adding to it, meeting new people and getting to know them will help you understand how different people think, or get to know about their culture. Moreover, get to learn things which you were never introduced to. Drawing from my past experience, once I had a meeting with a Japanese client discussing about the requirements for a product. The meeting eventually did not go well due to some misunderstanding from both ends. However, after consulting with my manager he stated that I was interpreted as rude to the client as I did not greet him by bowing my head. Funny as it seems, to the Japanese this is a very important custom. If had a friend who would have informed me about this beforehand I would have surely benefited. Hence, it is clearly visible why making new friends is important.
To wrap it all up, I feel making new friends is really important because it helps you broaden your reach and as well as get to know more about different cultures and increase your knowledge about different people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...re never introduced to. Drawing from my past experience, once I had a meeting with a Japanese c...
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Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...panese this is a very important custom. If had a friend who would have informed me...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your knowledge about different people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, i feel, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72074468085 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70470093379 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518617021277 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7289552246 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5238095238 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329790098214 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106800796411 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140861487031 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254243797926 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142563173494 0.0645574589148 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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