It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life
The emergence of the internet has significantly changed people's routine activities, and living without it is out of imagination. Some people believe that to feel happiness in the life we do not need the internet and social media; others think that you can live a full life without it. I adamantly hold the belief that the internet plays a vital role in our lives and feeling happy without it is impossible.
First and foremost, lacking the access to the internet will isolate people from the society. Since we are living in a competitive world, people need to handle arduous tasks in their daily activities. Accordingly, these various responsibilities inhibit their spare time to allocate it to visit their family and friends. However, the entrance of social media outlets was a relief to this meaningful problem. Availability of the internet is a tremendous help for world's population to connect with their family, failing that, people were obliged to travel cities and countries to visit them and since they don’t have enough free time they cannot talk to them regularly and lead them to isolation. The consequence of this matter is depression.
Secondly, nothing is more important than setting a goal and achieving it. As a matter of fact, to feel successful, people need to set a perspective for themselves and reaching it will assist them to feel satisfied. Admittedly, the internet will pave the humans' way to prosperity. Whether they are student or employee, they need to access to wide range of information to have sustainable development. Nowadays, the World Wide Web is the primary source of information. As a result, if someone ignores this source from his life, I definitely sure that being cultivated in this world is impossible. Some people might believe that we need to live in the moments, and we have to squeeze as joy as possible from daily activities. They assume that we do not need internet in order to achieve this goal. However, I believe that people cannot turn a blind eye to their future because some day in their life they will notice that they have ruined many things in the past and fixing all they have done is out of their hands.
In a nutshell, I believe that internet is an inseparable part of our routine and having the sense of happiness is not plausible without it. I feel this way because the internet helps us to connect with our friends and family network, is necessary to foster in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7078211732 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49043062201 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4509871352 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284473124223 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763153471055 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065832468697 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178912393673 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578692820892 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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