learn history courses
To make for students' better competitiveness, universities put more and more concentration on their integrated development. Some argues that history course is so conducive to students' knowledge reserve that everyone should take it, while others claims that it is meaningless for some students to take. As for me, not all the university students should be asked to take history courses. I am going to elaborate my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the history knowledge is useless for many majors. As we all know, knowledge can make a difference only when being used properly. However, history is more significant concern to literacy and liberal art, but has little connection with science and engineering. For example, I am major in computer science. What I learn every day is data structure, programming language, the composition of computer, and so on. During my college life, I almost have not used any history knowledge at all, besides, history has nothing to do with my future career. As a result, taking history courses is totally a waste of time and energy for students who do not need it.
Secondly, the time saved by not taking history courses can be utilized to do other projects. In general, learning history takes plenty of time to recite a series of historical events, the particular time of occurrence, and the correlative celebrities. Because of that, history courses will be too time-consuming to do other more meaningful activities. For students majored in science and engineering, it is more central to do practical experiments and scientific projects. In my university, students commonly work in the laboratory, learning and discussing the knowledge about cutting-edge of technology. Compared with sitting in the classroom and remembering the rigid history calendar, doing projects can better expand students’ outlook, enrich their experience and help their future development.
What’s more, it is more beneficial to students who not major in history learning it in some other ways. Admittedly, basic history knowledge is necessary for people to know about their civilization, understand the world and establish the correct worldview. However, learning history by taking courses is not the best choice for everyone. Students can also learn about historical common sense by attending lecture, reading books or watching some video materials. Thus, students can not only absorb fundamental history knowledge interestingly, but also not put too much effort on it.
All in all, from my perspective, education should vary from one person to another, which indicates that it is not a good idea to require every university students taking history courses..
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...iversity students taking history courses..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4028436019 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04149850347 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.389864644 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1304347826 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344178817643 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112072756719 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984510311525 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21348176499 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105264363797 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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