the learning from our experience is better than books.
Books are considered to be the best source of all knowledge, but not everything is learned contained in books. Some people believe that without reading books and put their information in practice, our learning would be much harder than we thought. In contrary, others disagree and think books these days can offer us sufficient valuable knowledge. According to me, as far as I am concerned, I would appreciate the fact that knowledge gained from a person's real life experience is much more crucial than that obtained from books resources. Several situations in our lives perhaps need real experience to understand such as learning how to drive, learning about different cultures and education.
First, in term of learning how to drive. No doubt, manuals, and guides include essential theoretical nature of an idea and concepts which teach the person about traffic laws, road signs, and how to handle some natural obstacles such as how to drive in fog, snow, and heavy raining. However, without putting yourself behind the wheels on the road. A person would never learn how to drive. Apparently, the more you drive, the more experience you obtained. Books have nothing to add to our experience.
Second, imagine yourself living in the USA and want to learn about China. You have two options: either purchase books about that country which teach you anything you need such as their language, their history, and their customs, which is the cheapest way of learning but long time learn. Or travel to live their for couple months which is more expensive but time-consuming. Which way do you think is better for you?. For me, I think each book presents its.' author's perspective. If you want to learn about other countries, you have to get up close to their population. Furthermore, the experience of dealing with native people teach you a lot about hidden things such as their idioms, their facial impressions with some situations. Without real interaction, your books play nothing in teaching.
Finally, even with education and whatever the subject is, it is mandatory for each school to put couple months of its students' graduation year into practice. They have to volunteer and interact with real work situations. For many, this way plays an evitable role for mastering the theoretical information and knowledge in real life. For example, I admit that it is impossible for me to study pharmacy and memorise all generic or brand names, also to differentiate between dosage forms, without practising in the store situation. I spent six hours daily trying to understand those tough subjects. Pharmacy books information harder to absorb without real experience with patients and medicine life.
All in all, books are like lights in one's pursuit's life. However, real life experience is instrumental for learning many things in person's life such as driving, learning about other countries and hard educational subjects.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'no doubt', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237037037037 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.159259259259 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0944444444444 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0314814814815 0.046263068375 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0722222222222 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118518518519 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0407407407407 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66297983181 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388888888889 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00185185185185 0.00188951952338 98% => OK
Determiners: 0.062962962963 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00740740740741 0.0209618222197 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2914.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 476.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1218487395 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363445378151 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271008403361 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21218487395 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13025210084 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66297983181 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533613445378 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.5540820153 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3030525421 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.1008403361 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.50704225352 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275507945554 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0938016479244 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791869898331 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432017568545 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163250161859 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812386439921 0.114077575197 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067373215028 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283190706661 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480099423053 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173421416002 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852278774637 0.0618886996521 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 63 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19 Out of 30
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