LIFE TODAY IS BETTER AND COMFORTABLE THAN PST.DO YOU AGREE OD DISAGREE ABOUT THIS IDEA?
across several studies, revealed a correlation between your attidue and your opinion about life. so people are split on this statement. some are agree and other disagree. together, the two would have their reasons. in the following paragraphs, i contend important reasons and inform you of my opinion.
first and foremost reason is about technologies which boom many facet of live and make it beter.for instance, by smart phone you can go every where and donot miss , added to they can help you alot. yesterday, phone of man who was sick inform other about his sickness and save him.
second reasons is about freedom. in the past, there have not been freedom about choosing your partner and trend and marriage. today you can choose every men and women to be your partner . until 2000 , every man and woman must be marriaged in age 40, on the contrary now you can be single forever and no one ask you about it.
last reason is about relationship among people whom no longer have strong relationship as past. my mother told me stories about her childhood and strong relationship between her family which is unbelievable for me. most of the indiviuals who acclaim past was better mention that point.
in short,there were many reasons but i try to encapsulate all of them and select most important of them. i agree with statement since in spite of all possible merit of life today other are more likely to consider third reason and stand out for thier position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, for instance, in short, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77470355731 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43648566635 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644268774704 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6078398379 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176484098102 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552233989727 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290538664024 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903411877522 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266371617261 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.