do you agree or disagree with this idea. technology decrease children creativity.give your reasons.
Technology has an important role in our daily life and our future in a way which addicted us and we feel miserable without it. It has its merit and demerits like other things. In recent studies revealed, children recognized as most vulnerable ones for using technologies. I strongly believe technology sapping kid’s creativity and in the following paragraphs I contend my view point.
Allowing kids to gain access to electronic devices such as tablet, lap top ,etc. may cause some problem in forming their emotional and how to manage it. For instance every times that my brother cries, mom entrain him by video game and it is very bad because she did not try to find the reason and maybe he had serious problem.
Second reason is about learning skill in kids. Problem solving and team working are skills that kids learn in playing with other not working with media because in media they can know answer from repeating it. For example in educational software they konw2+3=5 but they do not know about its concept.
Also it should be noted that technology has some merits to children to and some people believe that it is very beneficial for kids that is partly because of they learn how to use technology from low ages.
To wrap it up, kids that more use technology are more likely to have decreasing in their creativity and it give me the sense that most be a rules for using technology for children and even adolescent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.728 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4719741099 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5122000627 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107661588521 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338388325491 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349456904885 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623542078615 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363317776711 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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