When people look back into history, they always have mixed feelings. There is always something in the past that we definitely miss, and there are also things that we don’t care for. For some people, camparing their lives now with the life their grandparents had when they were little can be hard, for there’s always something in the fast that’s nice. But not for me, because I believe life today is way more comfortable and easier. The kind of life my grandparents had when they were children was simply miserable.
First of all, it was such a tough time back then. When my grandparents were children, the civil war just ended, and the country was in terrible shape. People were starving everywhere, and there was never eough clothes or shelter for everybody. Things were extra difficult for orphants like my grandfather. According to his own story, my grandfather’s most familis got slaughtered during the war, leaving him all alone by himself. He had to live on the street and beg for food door to door to stay alive. Things finally picked up after the government found him and put him in school. My life now is peaceful and abundent, with ample food and clothing, and that’s something my grandparents can not even picture when they were kids.
Secondly, life now is so convenient with all the advanced technology. There are new development of science and technology daily, to help people satisfy their everyday needs. For instance, when my grandparents were traveling when they were little, they used donkey and their own feet, making their journey extremely time-consuming and painful. Now we have cars and planes and trains, in which we can cover thoudsands of kilometers in hours while enjoying air-conditioning. Things are way more convenient these days.
There’s no denying that there are always things that we miss from the time when our grandparents were little. People that time were more honest, loyal, and honourable. However, as they have adimited themselves a couple of times, if my grandparents got the chance to choose, they would prefer a peaceful and ample childhood like kids nowadays can enjoy.
In a word, I strongly believe life nowadays is way better than it was when my grandparents were little, with all the convenience of modern technology and no war or starvation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'door to'.
Suggestion: door to
... to live on the street and beg for food door to door to stay alive. Things finally picked up af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03875968992 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82338735119 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532299741602 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1410573172 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32178445552 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989634316917 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995306434768 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19386956013 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602014246042 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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