There is no denying that we live in a highly developed society with readily available products and technology that make our life far more different than it was in the past. Therefore I agree that, nowaday's, we are enjoying more convenient and more comfortable live than our grandparents used to be in the past. The basis for my views is because advent of freedom, technology and medical health advancement.
It is widely believed that our ancestors used to live in most harsh and unfair conditions. they were not allow to speak for their rights or protests for their freedom. They were under stress from their rulers and their governments. As a result, they have to obey and to follow their governemnts regim and rules. Live preson or execution was the punishment for people who disagrees or refutes their regimes. In contrast, people, nowaday's, have all the right to express their opinion. not only that but also they are allowed to change their governments through national voting or protesting. For instance, in 2010 Egyptian show their disagreement with the governments by performing massive protests in Tahrier Square. Because they had the freedom of speech, Egyptian government stepped down for another government to fill the place. Such privileges were not available for our grandparents.
In addition to freedom, advent of the technology have been brought even more benefits to our life. The most fundamental one is the computer. In the past, people used to communicate by writing letters. Spouse or lovers used to spend weeks or months waiting to hear news form his/her partner. However, with the introduction of computer, people now can communicate instantly using Skype, Facebook and Emails. Such Technology made communication more practical and convenient. In contrast, it was out of rich at our grandparents era.
Finally, As a result of Technology developments, many benefits have been brought to our generations. One of the main benefits is the advancement in health system. The lack of medication and hospitals in the past had a devastating impact in our grandparents lives. From children through elderly, people used to suffer form different health issues and diseases. For example, plague harvested millions of lives in 1920. However, nowaday's scientists discovered tremendous medication and vacciens that eliminate plague entirely from the whole world. Yet, this is not the only achievements that we are enjoying. In fact, the development in Bio-medical and DNA treatment have been reduced life threatening diseases to almost half of what it was in the past.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that, Due to all the reasons provided above, our life is much easier and comfortable than it was in the past.
Essay evaluation report
The basis for my views is because advent of freedom, technology and medical health advancement.
The basis for my views is because of the advent of freedom, technology and medical health advancement.
Sentence: As a result, they have to obey and to follow their governemnts regim and rules.
Error: governemnts Suggestion: governments
Error: regim Suggestion: regime
Sentence: Live preson or execution was the punishment for people who disagrees or refutes their regimes.
Error: preson Suggestion: prison
flaws:
More subClauses wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 444 350
No. of Characters: 2225 1500
No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.59 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.011 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.782 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.892 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.407 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.257 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.431 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...y that make our life far more different than it was in the past. Therefore I agree t...
^^^^
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...more different than it was in the past. Therefore I agree that, nowadays, we are enjoying...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ve in most harsh and unfair conditions. they were not allow to speak for their right...
^^^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
...sh and unfair conditions. they were not allow to speak for their rights or protests f...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'speaking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: speaking
... unfair conditions. they were not allow to speak for their rights or protests for their ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...all the right to express their opinion. not only that but also they are allowed to ...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255533199195 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.148893360161 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0663983903421 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0583501006036 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0684104627767 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12676056338 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0402414486922 0.0351676179071 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86936130689 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342052313883 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0643863179074 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00402414486922 0.0209618222197 19% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00603621730382 0.0139019557991 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2734.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 443.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17155756208 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3769751693 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293453724605 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227990970655 0.174417080927 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155756207675 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86936130689 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519187358916 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.6419498617 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 15.275862069 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8069384215 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.275862069 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.275862069 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.448275862069 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 44.6212345295 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.53284671533 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188024687075 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0884833285993 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0838440956866 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439613731219 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17002338657 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063674558559 0.114077575197 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626212576036 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.340437849422 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0768690720775 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154860783375 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710506688567 0.0618886996521 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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