Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other choose watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why?
Fulfilling spread spectrum of spectators’ expectations, movies are the most popular entertainment among others in twenty centuries. Although, movies are typically produced based on playwright, there are also movies based on books or reality. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether it is better to read the book based on which movie is produced or conversely, has long been a topic of controversy among different spectators and circles. On the on hand, there are people who adhere to the belief that reading book before watching movies aid spectators to easily understand the story behind the movie; on the other hand, others believe that watching movies first has outstanding merits. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weight since not only does the interest in watching movies grow but also does it make spectator interested in reading novel.
The most important part of every movie is the story behind the movies. Although, visual effects sometimes attract spectators’ attention, spectators are typically interested in following different stories. Moreover, what really raises spectator’s interest to watch movies is the goal which the major character follows and ups and downs which he will experience so as to accomplish his goal throughout the movie. In fact, spectator usually like to watch movies which the story is close to the story of their life or goals which they would follow them in their life but they couldn’t. Therefore, such appealing aspects of the movies will be lost and the popularity of the movies will decrease if people read books before watching movies.
Watching movies assists people to understand the details of story when they read the novel. In fact, movies will give spectators an image regarding the characters in the story, therefore, when they are reading the novel, they can focus more on the details which the author would reflect on the reader’s mind. Moreover, spectators will establish an intimate connection with the characters, as a result of which they will be more interested in reading the novel. For instance, I remember when I was reading Harry potter novel, the name of the characters reminds me the characters in movie and interaction between them which was really striking to me. Therefore, filmmakers can increase the number of sold novels if they produce a high quality movie based on the particular book.
To wrap it up, watching movies before reading its books not only does it make spectator interested in following the movies but also dramatically increase the sale of books. If I were a filmmaker, I would first make the movies then publish the books.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...or reality. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether it is better to read the book based on ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... ups and downs which he will experience so as to accomplish his goal throughout the movi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18433179724 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82352001673 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458525345622 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7457897577 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.352941176 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411230578071 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164427573494 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945269758603 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293087452614 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890359115803 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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