In many places students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the morning w

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In many places, students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school. Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning, but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the morning would be better for students. Which view do you agree with and why?

Arriving early in the morning is a good approach for students. When you have to start school is an essential factor in a student's performance; I believe starting the day very early gives them the advantage of having more time and being more energetic. I think it also helps them learn discipline.
Early in the morning, you usually have more energy to study and learn things, in contrast to later in the day when you already have used your power for other things and are less enthusiastic and less focused. For example, if children don't go to school in the morning, they usually start to play, and by the time they go to school, they are tired. Similarly, teachers would use their energy on cooking and cleaning their house, and by the time they want to teach, they are also exhausted.
An excellent solution to have more time is to start early. If students start early, they have more time to learn, and they can leave school sooner in the afternoon and have time for doing homework. Furthermore, it could give students time to learn valuable skills besides school, or they can have time to work and be more independent, or even go to parties and relax.
Arriving very early in the morning could teach students discipline. To attend school in the early morning, they should wake up early every day. If you want to wake up early every day, you should sleep at a specific time to be ready in the morning. Consequently, students learn discipline and responsibility through this simple task.
Suppose I have to choose between studying early and later in the morning. In that case, I choose early in the morning because, in my opinion, it gives me the benefit of having more time, being more energetic, and I can learn discipline and responsibility.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...tart school is an essential factor in a students performance; I believe starting the day...
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Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discipline'
Suggestion: to discipline
...getic. I think it also helps them learn discipline. Early in the morning, you usually ha...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... less focused. For example, if children dont go to school in the morning, they usual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, if, similarly, so, thus, for example, i think, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52231564945 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1278769523 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349469524077 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135925538029 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803154842078 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218995562017 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891109187451 0.0645574589148 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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