Concept of marriage was introduced in ancient age for development of next generation. When the concept of civilization was introduced at that time people started to follow the marriage concept. Many ancient cave wall painting showed that marriage is one of the oldest ritual followed by human beings. In this two people decide to live together and take care of each other and their offspring. Methods of getting married changes as cast and religion as well as region changes. Some tribes marry in front of fire or sea while other may choose to do it in front of god.
In ancient age two people decided to stay together and they live together. There was no specific ritual. As time passed community system was developed. The grant of community became necessary for living together. Parents call their relatives and friends to marriages asking them to give blessings for newly weds. Now a days in many countries a girl and boy cannot live together without prior permission. This permission is called as marriage.
As we move on in time people thought that as many as people we call on ceremony will increase on prestige in community. They felt that if people are thinking and talking about how we spent money on marriage will increase our position. Someone said that marriages are fixed in heaven and there is no need to spend extra money on such ceremonies. Arranging money for such things is not everyone's cup of tea so few tend to take loan to celebrate marriages which is making them financially weaker. Indian businessman Mr Mukesh Ambani spent crores and millions in daughters marriage. For rich people this much expenses are bearable. When it comes to small and poor families they barely manage their daily expenses, marriages are making them poorer.
The change is marriage system is giving negative impact on society. There is no need to do so. To prevent this government has given option of register marriage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...age for development of next generation. When the concept of civilization was introdu...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...together. There was no specific ritual. As time passed community system was develo...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... them to give blessings for newly weds. Now a days in many countries a girl and boy cannot...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...m to give blessings for newly weds. Now a days in many countries a girl and boy cannot...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...aughters marriage. For rich people this much expenses are bearable. When it comes to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89908256881 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50030251889 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6965759191 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.652173913 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2173913043 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21739130435 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113615051679 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339152448428 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376638341623 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747347855418 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269673972304 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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