When it comes to the most important thing government could do, there are a lot of options for the government to improve the health care situation. However, whether cleaning the environment is the first priority to do would be an argument. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the statement. The reasons for my taking this position are as follows.
To begin with, health insurance is much important compared with cleaning the environment due to the expensive cost of having medical support. For example, in Taiwan, everyone has to join the National Health Insurance. People should pay insurance fee with a portion of their incomes. By this means, even poor people can afford to have medical care at a low price. For the common cold, people only pay five dollars to have a high quality of health care in Taiwan. This is a proper way to make sure everyone be able to see a doctor. Thus, I think the health insurance system is much important than environment cleaning.
Furthermore, it is a higher priority for governments to educate all the people to have a basic knowledge of health. In other words, preventing from virus widely spreading in a country is a duty of all the people. For instance, in the current situation, there is a serious pandemic around the world. However, part of countries is still remaining safe and in low confirmed cases. In Taiwan and Japan, governments teach people the basic way of CONVID-19 spreading. Thus, people are required and willing to keep in social distance or wear a mask in case of virus spreading. We can see that there are really few confirmed cases in these two counties, which presents the importance of health education for all the people. In contrast, there are still new confirmed cases in the states due to people's lacking awareness of inflection in the country. Therefore, health education is also a policy for the government with higher priority.
In addition, the infrastructure can perform health care in an effective and efficient way under a large scale. For example, in Taipei, there is a power plant which produces a lot of air pollution. We note that there was a increasing number of people getting lung cancer ten years ago. The government found that there is only one filter to clean up the exhausted air. Thus, the government conducted to build up an effective filter to make sure the exhausted air was safe and clean. After few years, the decreasing number of people with cancer indicates that the infrastructure is successfully prevent people from getting cancer. It is a much effective way to keep people healthy comparing with cleaning up the environment.
To sum up, there are a lot of policies which are more important than keeping the environment clean by the government. Health education and insurance systems play a crucial role in health care by the government. Under no circumstance can we exaggerate the importance of policies in health care. Only when the government considers policies in different aspects, can the country be a better place for all the people.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f air pollution. We note that there was a increasing number of people getting lun...
^
Line 7, column 593, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevented'.
Suggestion: prevented
...that the infrastructure is successfully prevent people from getting cancer. It is a muc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.0752688172 433% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75046089849 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459302325581 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2879771789 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6774193548 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6451612903 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41935483871 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325447633429 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777810845022 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954489686536 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201799731682 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109281940807 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f air pollution. We note that there was a increasing number of people getting lun...
^
Line 7, column 593, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevented'.
Suggestion: prevented
...that the infrastructure is successfully prevent people from getting cancer. It is a muc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.0752688172 433% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75046089849 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459302325581 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2879771789 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6774193548 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6451612903 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41935483871 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325447633429 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777810845022 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954489686536 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201799731682 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109281940807 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.