Movies are the most popular media devices which have been reachable. As people have followed these movies, this show sectors progressed rapidly which means a myriad movie was directed and presented and this expansion will not be stopped. Some reasons that are why the movies became so popular around the world are as follows.
First and foremost, movies is a way of entertainment that can be affordable for people easily. Now, nearly all houses have one or more TV in their places. Thus, easy access to movies makes it more widespread among people. Additionally, the auditions can watch several style movies whatever they want like comedy, drama even documentary movies can be watched by people thanks to TV.
Moreover, the movie industry is related to the business sector. As long as there is a movie, there is an advertisement too. Because of this, to sustain constant of movies, they will be supported by the companies which selling good or products. While we are watching movies, we are having been exposed to the ads even if we are not interested in some parts. The commercial factor will not decrease the popularity.
Last but not least, by movies people can reach all feelings and all vision, watching movies enable people to get wings into their imagination. They can look their life from a different angle with movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...and this expansion will not be stopped. Some of the reasons that are why the movies became ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42304392143 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5751253712 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262144726864 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963040520522 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105978847003 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161536582928 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946186888824 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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