Moving to different countries or towns is not good because it can make a person lose old friends.
One s opinion has the power to shift the paradigm of society. When ten percent of the population holds an unshakable belief, peoples belief will be adopted by the majority of the community. Evidently, people need only one person to change the group of ten, and the ten will begin to change the entire modus of operation for hundreds to shift. The disagreement I choose to make for the topic moving to different place is not good choice becuase a person can lose old friends can also change the paradigm. Therefore, I will provide two reasons to prove the power to change others opinions with right reasons. First, if theres a great perpose for moving to different places, nothing matters. Second, close friends will never go away from you even if you are far away from them.혻
To begin with, it is more important why someone moving to different places which is not familar. If someone moving away from their homeland, there might valid reason because no one feel comfortable with moving to other places. There must be reasons why someone move to other places like for job oppertunity or admission for good university. In my case, when I was graduated high shcool I moved to Seoul to get into university. Although Its not easy choice to determine to go away from my hometown, but I must do for my dream being Robot engineer. Theres many constraint which make me impossible to study in good environment in my hometown so I must leave my hometown. For someone who moving to different place with great purpose, losing familiar environment is not important.
In addition, moving to different countires or towns are not necessarily mean losing old friends. If someone has friends indeed, their friends will never betray them. Physical distance is not important factor to maintain their relationship. For instance, I have many friends in my hometown which is far from where I am. I rarely meet my friends when I visit my hometown, but they still are my best friends. How close distance we are?, how often we meet? is not important factor to determine our relationship. Therefore, if someone has real friend heshe will never lose their old friends no matter how heshe moving to far away from their hometown.
Opinions are the medium between the knowledge and the ignorance. In such a case, man must struggle to win a tug-of-war with the power of knowledge to make opinions into the reality. I have written logic of purpose is more important to consider moving to different place and distance is not factor to determine relationship with friends to make my reasoning for the topic that never give up to moving to other places because of close people. It is time to blow the final whistle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 618, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... opinions with right reasons. First, if theres a great perpose for moving to different...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable moving'.
Suggestion: comfortable moving
... might valid reason because no one feel comfortable with moving to other places. There must be reasons ...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'moves'.
Suggestion: moves
...aces. There must be reasons why someone move to other places like for job oppertunit...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...t do for my dream being Robot engineer. Theres many constraint which make me impossibl...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun constraint seems to be countable; consider using: 'many constraints'.
Suggestion: many constraints
...r my dream being Robot engineer. Theres many constraint which make me impossible to study in go...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...se distance we are?, how often we meet? is not important factor to determine our r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77467811159 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.557335852 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463519313305 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7732309981 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.64 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244619399756 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683175184836 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104621623825 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144241084632 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201957429791 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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