Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
someone who is quiet
someone who we are similar to
someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
We are all surrounded by different kinds of neighbours. Advertently or inadvertently, the type of neighbours we have tend to have a positive or negative influence on our personal life as well. I personally feel that having someone who is supportive as a neighbour is the best. The following essay will illustrate why I prefer a supportive neighbour.
First, having a supportive neighbour would give us a sense of security that can help live a peaceful life. We often hear about all kinds of stories on the television. There is a theft at one place, or some maniac injured someone at another place and so on. After being exposed to such kind of unfortunate incidents, one would feel intimidated to go to bed peacefully. When we have a supportive neighbour, we unconsciously feel a bit secure thinking that they would come to rescue if and when such incidents happen to us.
Second, supportive neighbours are always socially amicable. The children of both families interact a lot which help in imbuing social values into the children. These social values can help them a lot in their personal growth. For example, when my aunt’s children come over to my house, they are reluctant to meet new people because they don’t have neighbours that interact with each other. This would have a negative impact on the children’s future as they grow older, they will have to interact with a lot of new people.
Finally, a supportive neighbour is always helpful. One cannot lead a life just by oneself. There will be situations when one would require the help of others ,and who else is best to reach out when one has a supportive neighbour? Things could be as simple as receiving a courier or as big as attending the children in the house if one gets late to the house due to an important meeting.
All in all, having a supportive neighbour eases our lives to an extent that even the neighbour would not have idea about. They help with having a sense of security, implanting social values in the children and being helpful in difficult times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: tended
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ease'?
Suggestion: ease
...l in all, having a supportive neighbour eases our lives to an extent that even the ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78531073446 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74275602044 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2092920636 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145562403028 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519195150572 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754633995309 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924763029402 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589560612676 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.