Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own
words. Do not use memorized examples.
In the present world, younger people feel that they are enjoying life more than the older people as they go out for parties every weekend, hangout with friends and earn more than the older people did when they were younger. I personally feel that older people enjoy life more than younger people do. I feel this way for the reasons that will be explained in the following passage.
First, let me define what enjoyment means. Is it going to the pub every weekend and dance like hell? Or is it having a peaceful state of mind everyday? I agree with the second statement. In today’s world, young people have hectic weekdays due to professional careers. Young people run against time every single day to make their mark on the world. This rat race puts on them an immense pressure which they plan to get rid of during weekends. Once the weekend is over, they are back in the game. Older people, on the other hand, lead a normal and halcyon life almost everyday. This helps them to feel life to its fullest.
Second, the older people have fewer responsibilities than the younger people. They will have fulfilled their duties as a child: studied hard to gain a better job, as a youngster: strived hard to survive in the competitive world and as a parent: dutifully looking after their family. Consequently, they would have a lot of spare time to take their dog for a walk, to play around with their grandchildren and spend some fun time with their peer groups. Most importantly, they are mindful only of the present unlike younger people who spend quite a lot of time regretting for the past mistakes and planning for the future.
In this context, I would like to quote an example from the community that I live in. Everyday, I see young people, including myself, rushing through every second of the day right from waking up early in the morning, going to the gym, getting their children ready if they have one, rushing to the workplace and then coming back home late in the night and getting ready for next hectic day. On the opposite end of the spectrum, I see older people taking their own time to wake up, spend some quality time with family and grandchildren, go out to the community library, have evening walks with peers and come back home as happy people.
Thus, the older people enjoy life more than younger people do as they are not in the rate race to compete with the world and they have fewer requirements and responsibilities than the younger people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
..., lead a normal and halcyon life almost everyday. This helps them to feel life to its fu...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, second, so, then, thus, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63781321185 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3583494553 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498861047836 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1183289359 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9523809524 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201021205243 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070010813898 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825818630114 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139209595926 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859821250872 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.