Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
On one hand, some people say that young people enjoy more than older peopl because of more time available whereas on the other hand some people also say that older people enjoy because of more money they have which they can spent. However, I agree with the first statement that young people definitely enjoy a lot more than older people. This essay covers the reasons as to why is that the case.
To begin with, young people have a lot more time as compared to older people. Old people are working class people who are responsibly doing their jobs to earn money, pay off debts (if any), save for future or any kind of emergency etc. Thus, their life is busy with the tasks given by the company for which they are employed. On the contrary, younger generations are in university or just in the beginning of their career. As a result, they have lesser work load compared to older people. They also can easily adjust time because of new "flexible hours" policy that many companies are introducing. Furthermore, for a student, he/she can enjoy more because once they are done with their classes and homework assignments, they are free. They can quickly organize a small trip with their friends and be back in refreshed and free from stress.
Secondly, young people have a lot more energy and stamina as compared to older people. Old people can't afford a trip (energy wise) that requires long walks or climbing stairs etc. They just don't have the stamina and enthusiasm to do so. As a result they might not be able to enjoy some scenic beauties of a particular place such as a sunset (for which you would definitely have to climb). Compare this to younger generations. They have a lot more energy and stamina than older generations. Because of this, they are able to view such places and enjoy them. Not only that, given the same amount of time, they might also be able to visit more places as compared to older generations. As a result, they are able to enjoy a lot more.
Lastly, younger generations might have a lot more friends compared to older generations who might have lost contact after their busy life. The result of this is quite predictable. Their only source of enjoyment is to enjoy with family. On the other hand, having company of friends and enjoy with them makes a lot more memories. Not only that, young generations can easily switch between the companions because of the amount of friends they have. This, however, does not mean that one can not enjoy with family. It is definitely possible but the memories and craziness obtained from friends is quite more than those with family.
To sum up, the younger generations are able to enjoy a lot more than older generations because of three reasons. First, they have more free time available inspite of beginning of job or being a student. Second, they have more energy and stamina allowing them to not get tired easily. Finally, young people have lot more friends sharing the same level of craziness which is bound to make more memories.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
... of more money they have which they can spent. However, I agree with the first statem...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...as compared to older people. Old people cant afford a trip energy wise that requires...
^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...walks or climbing stairs etc. They just dont have the stamina and enthusiasm to do s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, kind of, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2487.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70132325142 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32792186296 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398865784499 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9061072838 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2258064516 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.064516129 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32258064516 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268307573685 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839118555941 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797912204681 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188789803874 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901139716088 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
... of more money they have which they can spent. However, I agree with the first statem...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...as compared to older people. Old people cant afford a trip energy wise that requires...
^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...walks or climbing stairs etc. They just dont have the stamina and enthusiasm to do s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, kind of, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2487.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70132325142 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32792186296 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398865784499 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9061072838 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2258064516 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.064516129 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32258064516 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268307573685 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839118555941 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797912204681 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188789803874 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901139716088 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.