Neighbours are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
The quality of the living environment plays an essential role in our lives. Especially, the neighbors, people who live with us, influence our days very much. When it comes to that "what characteristics should nice neighbors have? ", I raise two main points in the following paragraphs.
First of all, neighbors should be friendly enough to communicate and interact. Living in the same community, people need to manage the events and solve the problems in the community together. If the neighbors are not friendly and communicable, the affairs in the community cannot be determined and conducted well. For example, when I lived in the prior community, residents would hold the parties for children every summer vacation. Therefore we need to plan the programs for the whole day progress. In our discussion, one of our neighbors opposed a performance of a pop music band and insisted on removing this program. However, the band was very popular among the kids, and the decision was made by a fair vote. After we persuaded the family many times, they still refused to accept the decision. In the end, we canceled this performance. The children were all upset and even said that this was the worst party they have ever joined. The story demonstrates the importance of having friendly and communicable neighbors.
Secondly, having responsible neighbors can make the community managed well. Since every member in the community has the responsibility to maintain the environment, a neighbor who cares about the public affairs would be necessary. Take my present neighbor, Susan, as an example, she is a very responsible and considerate person. She is actively willing to manage our mailing room since we have the problem about missing the mails or taking the wrong letters from others. Moreover, She often reminds every member to conduct their cleaning works in the community, and if the person has some problem to finish the job, she will replace them to maintain the environment. Susan's example demonstrates how good a community could be if we have a responsible neighbor.
In conclusion, I believe that being friendly and responsible are the essential qualities of good neighbors. People having these two characteristics would be easily communicated and care about the environment of communities more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ies for children every summer vacation. Therefore we need to plan the programs for the wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19571045576 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92395355927 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560321715818 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.871232992 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2608695652 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124151704056 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381282078069 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409086625655 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884839917799 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426615396101 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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