Now a days there is ahuge technology revolution in many field of life. One of the important one is the computers, which is devise used in a lot of field, kids usualy play games by using computer. in my openion playing games these game is a waste of time. In this essay I will explaine and gives acouple of example why I believe that.
First, kids spend a lot of time in playing, in this case they will waste the time and ignore their education. this time can used by doing their home work or reading important things. For instance, my doughter use her computer to play called my graft and waste a many hours with this game, therfore, she never concered about home work. Asa result her school level decline. After that , she begin to understand what is the problem. It's the video games. So , she by attaintion to her study and can arrange the time between studying and playing.
Second, playing computer games waste our time that have to be used in playing with their friends, furthermore learn kids who to communicat with each other and exchange the information, In addition to get an important skills of communication which are crucial for positive live. The kids in the past decade before the invention of computers games spend avery nice time by playing in gardens and inspire afrish air which is important to the health, instead of being inside with these harmful devices. Therfore they were more ceative than the children in these days, they can make their toys and share each other with the games.
Now a days there is ahuge technology revolution in many field of life. One of the important one is the computers, which is devise used in a lot of field, kids usualy play games by using computer. in my openion playing games these game is a waste of time. In this essay I will explaine and gives acouple of example why I believe that.
First, kids spend a lot of time in playing, in this case they will waste the time and ignore their education. this time can used by doing their home work or reading important things. For instance, my doughter use her computer to play called my graft and waste a many hours with this game, therfore, she never concered about home work. Asa result her school level decline. After that , she begin to understand what is the problem. It's the video games. So , she by attaintion to her study and can arrange the time between studying and playing.
Second, playing computer games waste our time that have to be used in playing with their friends, furthermore learn kids who to communicat with each other and exchange the information, In addition to get an important skills of communication which are crucial for positive live. The kids in the past decade before the invention of computers games spend avery nice time by playing in gardens and inspire afrish air which is important to the health, instead of being inside with these harmful devices. Therfore they were more ceative than the children in these days, they can make their toys and share each other with the games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6329588015 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31639383697 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.571763392 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515471007583 0.236089414692 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16500685422 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181819094517 0.0737576698707 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387609080512 0.150856017488 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238878999341 0.0645574589148 370% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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