Every day we have progress in different aspects of life; based on improvement is technology and science. In my opinion, people's way of living is improved based on the fact that preparing food is facilitated. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it takes less time in order to make food, so that it remains more time for other engagements. It is undeniable that make living these days is harder than before; therefore, people are busy with many works. They go to work early in the morning and come back home late at night. On the one hand, most of the times they would eat fast foods or make a simple one because of lacking time; on the other hand, if they had time, they would prefer to devote it for relaxing after a hard work. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I study in a university, and most of the times I am in the library, busy with my assignments, after that I have to go to a convenience store near my university, working as an accountant. I come back home around eleven at night. It doesn't need to mention how much tired I am after getting home, and clearly I can just have some prepared food.
In addition to more time for other activities, crudity in cooking doesn't restrict people not to have delicious and proper foods, especially for younger adults or university students. Most of the students have just started being independent; as a result, they are not ready to take all the responsibilities, such as cooking, at once. For instance, most of my classmates don't know anything to cook, other than eggs and potatoes; however, in order to be healthy their body requires variety of foods and ingredients. If there wasn't prepared food, eventually they would change to eggs.
In conclusion, I believe that prepared food has a positive impact on people's life. That is because they can benefit from that time for other activities, and because it would enable them to have different kinds of food even if they are hard to prepare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59116022099 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60762945756 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538674033149 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2189669017 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126282769489 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514493977474 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544399607249 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951972548377 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500252894445 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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