There is no shortage of debate whether it is easier to prepare food now or in the past. As far as I am concerned, in these days people find something beneficial with easy and fast food in their lifestyles. Although today’s meals are not as healthy as in the past, those are really economical and save lots of time. I cling to this outlook because of two main reasons, which I will discuss in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays people meet really difficult schedules in their jobs or even students in the school. So, it is notable that food, easy to prepare, helps people find more time to accomplish their daily objectives. Besides, with these kinds of food students can allocate more time to their studies and their enjoyment. Young people can focus on complete their projects without spending much time cooking, as well. To clarify my point, let me take myself as an example, when I was in the school my mother gave me packed food to eat in the break, but she needed to wake up around 5 am and cooked a difficult dish and this was really tiring for her. But now, she just gives me a sandwich and a yogurt Tony, so I am ready to enjoy my break.
Secondly, easy-to-prepare food also is beneficial for restaurants, they can serve fresh dishes to the public in less time, also people just wait from 5 to 10 minutes and they have what they ask for. Returning a bit to the past, restaurants either served food lasting lots of time or just served pre-cooked food. On the other hand, I think that now the food being easy to prepare has more advantages for restaurants and people. For instance, my uncle has a Chinese restaurant, he sells 50 dishes a day, and people are really satisfied with the service they have. However, this was not always his service. In the past, my uncle saves the food remains, and in order not to make people wait a lot, he served them those remains. Although he had no troubles because he froze all the food, it was not fresh. Now, he throws away the remains and serves dishes at the time people ask for them because they are easier to prepare.
To sum up, today’s food gives lots of advantages to people’s lives because people could save time spending it on other things and because people in restaurants can enjoy fresh meals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...easy and fast food in their lifestyles. although today's meals are not as healthy a...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nts, they can serve fresh dishes to the general public in less time, as a result, people just ...
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Line 5, column 754, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e served those remains. Although he had no many troubles because he froze all the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53071253071 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44534581333 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515970515971 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8530444345 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121327363369 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448965223295 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288851142379 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873314061549 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186266221521 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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