Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past
The society is witnessing tremendous changes in all aspects, improving the life quality of the majority people. They are living longer than the past according to the statistical data. I think there are twoseveral factors, including more healthy diet, regularly physical exercise and advanced medical service, contribute to our longevity extension.
As for healthy diet, it keeps stable metabolism for body. But previously people know knew little about diet knowledge and the daily foods they ate are were too simple, thus leading to the disrupting of normal metabolism. With development of basic subjects like biology and chemistry, people know more about food and nutrition. They Individuals today pay close attention to concentrate more on ingredients of food product as well as how much nutrition it contains. For example, the amount of nutritional objectscontents, including protein, minerals and vitamins, are marked on food package. People can cook their diner with high nutritional value. Moreover, new positions like nutrition scientist and manager give us a huge assistance on our daily food choice. For example, in our school cafeteria, nutrition manager will help chef choose the sources of food and combine them in a more nutritious way. Thanks to their efforts, the risk of disease caused by unhealthy diet like diabetes and heart attack are largely cut off. We could thus concentrate more on our study and work.
When it comes to the regularly physical exercise, it benefits health onby regulating mood and reducing the risk of many diseases. However, in the past, little knowledge was shown and few devices were available about regularly physical exercise. Fortunately, the conditions are very different at present. Large amount of gyms and exercise fields are established and many coaches who clearly know professional training ways can teach us patiently. In specific, the training equipment in gyms enables us to gain our muscle comfortably so that we are unlikely to get hurt, the training coaches provide us suitable plan for regular exercise in case of sport related disease. As a result, we lose our weight and build our muscles in a more effective and safe way.
In general, people cook their meal more nutritious, train their body more regularly and suitable properly and medical services are more advanced than before. All these changes will assist human with good health maintenance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...wledge and the daily foods they ate are were too simple, thus leading to the disrupt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, for example, i think, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31592689295 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73550254679 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587467362924 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2374134622 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9523809524 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613682706563 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209201584549 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443505046321 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531415696152 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396869326723 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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