Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past.
Good health is critical to people's pleasure and well-being. There is no doubt that everyone values his or her health regardless of the time. When it comes to whether individuals now or in the past tend to have good health, I believe that people today are more likely to keep perfect health.
First, there has been a significant improvement in medical knowledge and technology capabilities during the previous few decades. As a result of this advancement, efficient treatments for different diseases and ailments are now available, and health-problem prevention has become significantly less complicated. Vaccines, for example, are now available for a variety of diseases that were formerly quite common and, in some cases, fatal, such as polio and measles. Furthermore, more precise health monitoring devices, such as blood pressure monitors and activity trackers, are now accessible. The Fitbit, a well-known fitness tracker, can monitor your heart rate, steps done, and calories burnt, among other things. People are healthier now because of advances in medical expertise and technology.
Another factor is a deeper understanding of the significance of good lifestyle choices. A growing number of people are becoming aware of the need of making better choices, such as consuming healthy foods and engaging in regular physical activity. This can be attributed, at least in part, to improved access to health and fitness information. There are now a variety of websites, apps, and other resources accessible that provide guidance on how to live a healthy lifestyle. WebMD, for example, is a website that offers advice on numerous elements of healthy living, including nutrition, exercise, and other topics. People nowadays would not be able to enjoy good health if it were not for the essential knowledge.
Furthermore, during the last several decades, access to medical care has greatly risen in many areas of the world, making it much simpler for individuals to acquire the medical treatment they require. Many nations are pursuing universal healthcare, which means that everyone has access to basic medical services. Furthermore, numerous governments have implemented laws and regulations mandating businesses to provide health insurance to their employees. The Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act (ACA), a law enacted in the United States, mandates businesses with more than 50 employees to offer health insurance. It is those guidelines that ensure modern employees remain healthy more easily.
To summarize, I believe that taking care of one's health is simpler today than it was in previous generations.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ummarize, I believe that taking care of ones health is simpler today than it was in ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, at least, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47044334975 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90725649181 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.816108817 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.761904762 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130442627501 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394953873259 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479534615058 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860623230862 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473902633079 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ummarize, I believe that taking care of ones health is simpler today than it was in ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, at least, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47044334975 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90725649181 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.816108817 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.761904762 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130442627501 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394953873259 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479534615058 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860623230862 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473902633079 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.