Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past.
In my perspective, maintaining a good degree of health is now easier than it was previously.
To begin, during the last few decades, there has been a considerable increase in both the amount of medical knowledge and technical capabilities. As a result of this progress, effective therapies for a wide range of illnesses and ailments are now accessible, and health-problem prevention has become far less complex. Vaccines, for example, are now available for a wide range of diseases that were formerly exceedingly prevalent and, in some cases, deadly, such as polio and measles. Furthermore, we have significantly enhanced cancer and other ailment therapies. Furthermore, more accurate methods for tracking our health, such as blood pressure monitors and activity trackers, are now accessible. The Fitbit is a well-known fitness tracker that can detect your heart rate, amount of steps taken, and number of calories burned, among other things.
Furthermore, an increasing number of individuals are becoming aware of the need of adopting good lifestyle decisions, such as eating a nutritious food and engaging in regular physical activity. This can be ascribed, at least in part, to the increased availability of health and fitness information. There are now several websites, apps, and other resources available that offer advice on how to live a healthy lifestyle. WebMD, for example, is a website that provides information on various aspects of healthy living, such as nutrition, exercise, and other issues. With the aid of the program CaloryCounter, users may track both their food and activity habits.
Last, access to medical care has greatly increased in many parts of the world over the last several decades, making it much easier for individuals to obtain the medical attention they require. For example, a growing number of countries are moving toward universal healthcare, which means that everyone has access to basic medical services. Furthermore, the governments of a number of nations have passed laws and rules requiring enterprises to offer health insurance to their employees. For example, the Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act (ACA) is a statute passed in the United States. This law requires enterprises with more than 50 workers to provide health insurance to their employees.
To summarize, I feel that taking care of one's health is more easier today than it was in prior generations.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ced cancer and other ailment therapies. Furthermore, more accurate methods for tracking our...
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Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...o summarize, I feel that taking care of ones health is more easier today than it was...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...feel that taking care of ones health is more easier today than it was in prior generations....
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, at least, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36220472441 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9514596163 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1437199608 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127825533828 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460201576761 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772364004186 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122403035977 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105739853756 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ced cancer and other ailment therapies. Furthermore, more accurate methods for tracking our...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...o summarize, I feel that taking care of ones health is more easier today than it was...
^^^^
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...feel that taking care of ones health is more easier today than it was in prior generations....
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, at least, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36220472441 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9514596163 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1437199608 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127825533828 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460201576761 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772364004186 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122403035977 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105739853756 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.