Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.

Healthcare and wellness are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact we live in a fast-paced and chaotic age, it is notable for us to stand on a healthy stage. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether it is easier for people to maintain good health at this time or not. Some people possess the conviction that this issue is more difficult for people recently, whereas I think it is easier and simplest for people to stay healthy. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.

The first reason coming to mind elucidating my point of view is that science and technology are in progress and we have billions of breakthroughs every single day. It goes without saying that these developments affect our lives and make it easier for us to stay healthy. Consider a situation in the past and history in those times cholera was widespread among the people. They got ill easily and died, but now, thanks to inventions like antibiotics and vaccines, we can control diseases and ills in a short time. When Covid-19 was spread among worldwide people, it didn’t take a long time that scientists to invent several vaccines. On the same hand, using smartwatches, like the Apple watch, people constantly check their health and be aware of their body temperature or heart rate. These watches send alarms and notifications to their owners and ask them to move after a while of indolent.

The second rational reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that our lifestyle has changed across the board, in recent years. People are more conscious about their diet and their body health. There are more controls on meals and activities. Lately, the government has been getting to grips with healthy plans for adults and young teenagers. There are many features that they manage over the schools and universities. They offer free gym subscriptions to students and run races like Marathon for adults. My parents take part in these activities and consequently, they are more aware of their health.

In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think it is easier for people to stay healthy because there are many valuable traits in science and technology and people have changed their lifestyles. It is anticipated that if people save these features, we can access a high range of health quality.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...uation in the past and history in those times cholera was widespread among the people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, while, i think, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93673965937 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67824753683 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1765872456 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.619047619 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0874273080507 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024143487894 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313529663956 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531416214049 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195515066863 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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