Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.
Throughout history, maintaining a good health plays a vital role in any human being’s life. Since, our health have a massive impact in our life and even can increase our longibility, humanas in all decays try to improve their health. From my point of view, todays people can more easily maintain a good health. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my perspective.
my first noteworthy reason is that today you can easily find any article about human body and nutrients in foods. By study these articles you will have knowledge about your body, and how it works, so you can change your habits and your diet to the healthier one. therefore, you can reaching to the good health in your life. In the past, for studying, people should read books but in these days people can find anything on the internet, so it is really easy to find many article about health these days. However, all articles and web sites on the internet is not sharing true and scientific facts, but you can find many useful websites that have used many trustful sources for their articles.
For another reason, I believe that, these days in any district we can find a gym. so, we can easily go there and do exercises. In the past, number of gyms are limited in the town; therefor, it was hard to do exercises, and only professional athletes have exercise in their daily routine. By doing exercise we can maintain our good health, so due the fact that these days gyms are more reachable, nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.
To wrap it up, I totally believe that because of improving technology, humanas has better knowledge of health and more easily can learn it and study about it. Also, nowadays we can more easily do exercise, without exercise, we can not maintain a good health. As result, these day people more easily live healthier than past people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74242424242 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42019548573 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0176172107 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242186996949 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943030827218 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899345661138 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162724855524 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498634271027 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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