Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?
Setting goals is an important aspect of any human being. In fact, humans should have some goals to make efforts to reach them. Because, any human life without a goal is meaningless. Some people prefer to set ambitious goals that really difficult and impossible to reach. Some people have the opposite view and believe it is better to set goals that they are reachable. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second group and prefer to set goals that after some attempts I can achieve them. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
The first reason that I believe it is worth to mention is for realistic goals you can make a plan and daily schedule and step by step you can close to them. Planning is the first step for closing your goals and it makes you have a better vision of how you can achieve it and in each step what you should do to get closer to your goal. For instance, if your goal is having a healthier body, the first step to achieve your goal is changing your diet and decrease your junk foods, and then you can register in a gym and do exercise. So, after some months, if you stick to your plan, you will achieve your goal. On the contrary, it is really hard and impossible to plan for ambitious dreams and unrealistic goals. As a result, without a clear plan, it is impossible to reach them, and this is why I prefer to have realistic dreams.
For the next reason, people who have realistic goals have better mental health. As I mentioned before, ambitious and unrealistic goals are difficult to achieve. Since this fact, people with these goals failed most of the time. These continual failings make them lose their motivation, and they will feel depression and emptiness in their life. In contrast, people with realistic dreams achieve them regularly, and that feeling of success makes them have a happier life. Thus, by having realistic goals we can have better mental health too.
To wrap it up, having realistic dreams have many advantages and can impact on many aspects of our life. I prefer to have realistic goals because I can make plans for them and they are more reachable, and also by following my realistic goals, I will have a happier life. However, there are many people who have really unrealistic goals and by following them achieve much success, but I believe it is more logical and achievable to follow realistic goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me goals to make efforts to reach them. Because, any human life without a goal is meani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, then, thus, for instance, in contrast, in fact, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60655737705 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39269547498 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405152224824 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5422735796 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4090909091 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409176232349 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143721869897 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778990572489 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281176140514 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406845917789 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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