Some people have ambitious dreams and keep pursuing them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better and why?
People all like dreams, but not all people love goals because they may think that the goals limit them to the grant dreams. Nevertheless, as for me, I prefer the more realistic one.
To begin with, realistic goals can let us get the joy of success more easily. Realistic goals are usually small and feasible for us, so it is highly possible that we achieve the goals if we put our time and efforts into it. In this way, we can obtain the joy of success. However, when we set the grant dreams, we may encounter a number of difficulties in the way to realize it. On account of that, we may not be confident if we usually cannot get over the difficulties well and soon. In the long-term, it is hard for us to insist in this condition. So, we may lose our heart and give up eventually.
Besides, more realistic goals usually can gain more support. I believe that everyone has this experience in his school. There are two average students which behave almost in many aspects. One says that he wants to be the president of the school union and the other just competes for the group leader of a team presentation. We might think that the first student is a bit vaunting because he is average in everything. However, for the other, we may find him a modest student which can rely on. Therefore, we might be willing to give him this chance to lead us in such project, and even we might give advice to him.
Finally, what I really want to say is that no matter how we set our goals or even dream, the actions play the most important role. If we really want something from the bottle of the heart, the loss of the confidence, the missing of the energy, the lack of the support and even the misunderstanding of others, these all do not matter. We can push ourselves with hearts, only, but enough.
So, for this topic, I believe that the strong heart can set everything for either goals or dreams.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, as for, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41025641026 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41243763822 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5088281274 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114079499334 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353775793228 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04895226345 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767403501818 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684726375331 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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