Nowadays, it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.
In contemporary society, people have witnessed huge social changes in every aspect of our daily life. And the importance of health issue has been brought up on the focal point nowadays. People debate over whether it is easier to maintain a healthly body compared to the past. The answer differs considerably from individual to individual. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this statement. My arguments for these points are listed as follows.
To start with, with the improvement of technologies and new methods to cultivate, food industry now hold the ability to grow crops that can provide more nutritient. For instance, in this semester I took a course about "the impacts science can bring to food industry". According to the article, the fruit people now eat are specialized through high-level technology. Comparing the pictures of Taiwan local grapes, it is easily seen that the grapes today are much larger, nearly two times as the size previously. But not only did the volume become larger, the sweetness and vitamins provided are actually doubled too. Thanks to the improvement, the food around us now are much more enjoyable and healthy in the same time.
In addition, the awareness of health issue have been magnified throughout these recent years. More people now tend to learn how to cook themselves from the cooking classroom or even attend a season training course in the gym. Take my own experience for example, in the past, I often suffer mental and phyiscal problems. I had bad sleeping quality at night, resulting in that I do not have enough energy on the next day. Luckily one day a friend of mine introduced me to workout sessions and encouraged me to do more excercise that can help my symptoms. Surprisingly, within two months, I slept really well and my body figure is also much more stronger. Because of my rapid transformation, more and more of my friends and family members wanted to join with me on training.
Admittedly, everything has two sides and some may claim that the food people consume and eat today are mostly through food processing, which can lead to more health issues. Unlike the past, when people are used to growing their own vegetables and fruits, so they can supervise over their crops from staying fresh and organic. However, with this issue so revelant, governments now state new stringent policies to constrain these health problems from increasing. Under this circumstance, food processing can still remain high quality and well controlled.
All in all, taking into account these factors, it is obvious that with modern technology and higher awareness among the publics, it is easier to maintain good health today. That is not to say that other opinions are completely out of merits. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that my points of view are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'impacts'' or 'impact's'?
Suggestion: impacts'; impact's
...emester I took a course about 'the impacts science can bring to food industry&apos...
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Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding food'?
Suggestion: the surrounding food
...doubled too. Thanks to the improvement, the food around us now are much more enjoyable and healthy...
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Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ly well and my body figure is also much more stronger. Because of my rapid transformation, mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01673640167 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72592777526 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5209991331 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137461437963 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352527504046 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744862035048 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863951483108 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710106885793 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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