It is obvious that nowadays with the development of technology people have access to a lot of entertainments containing reading different books, watching favorite films, playing computer games, and so on. Some assert that watching movies or films before reading books will be more enjoyable for them, while I prefer to read original book before watching the movie. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I have more interest in reading books, and it is more enjoyable for me than watching films. Therefore, I am willing to choose to read the book before watching the movie which is based on the book. Also, it is possible that I read a book many times and do not watch the film any more. For example, I have read harry pater books for times, whereas I have not watch the films that has built based on.
Moreover, other reason why I prefer to read books prior to watching the films is that many films which are made according to the original books may change some characters and happenings. For instance, recently I read a book about historical events that occurred in my country, and then I watch the related movie. I observed that the film was not exactly similar to the book, and some events which I have read in the book did not exist in the film. As a result, personally I like to read books before the watching the movies because they sometimes do not match.
To sum up, I prefer to read a book prior to watching the film owing to the fact that I enjoy reading the book more than watching the movie. In addition, in many cases, the films do not produce based on the original book and there are some changes in the characters and happenings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watched'.
Suggestion: watched
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41478281496 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6521657558 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.604253358756 0.236089414692 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256261339418 0.076458572812 335% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143371763218 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.434396655816 0.150856017488 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052477916624 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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