Nowadays, people are busy with many things. If you were given a short period of time, what would you choose?
1. Learn to play a new sport you never played;
2. Learn to cook food in a different way;
3. Learn to do some hand-made work like clothes.
In today’s modern life, thanks to the technological breakthroughs and cutting-edge innovations in every aspect of science, people’s lives are surrounded by lots of works. In this line of thought, some people are of the opinion that learning new sports or learning hand-made works makes their free time more efficient. I personally subscribe to the view that learning how to cook new foods is more enjoyable. In the following paragraphs, my reasons will be elaborated on this issue in more detail.
To begin with, there is no secret behind the fact that making foods not only is fun for the person who cooks it, but also others are benefited. Generally speaking, individuals usually prepare foods for their friends of family members. making new tastes for each meal means dedicating love and pleasure. Put it in other words, people can depict interest to their beloved by making foods. although cooking foods demands lots of efforts and creativities, it modifies mode of people because its result is shown immediately after finishing the meal. To delve more into it, my personal experience is a compelling example for this situation. When I want to express my feelings and indicate my respect to my family, I try to cook new foods, with new tests. Most of the friends likes it and appreciates it after they eat. it also is a challenge for me to make them happier each time by my surprising foods.
Another reason is that, busy routines’ lives force us to be in rash, and do not care about our health. it is caused people eat lots of junk foods which is not healthy. As far as I am concerned, in the short time it would be more appropriate if I can learn cooking healthy foods. In fact, the healthier foods people can make, the more efficiency they feel. For instance, last year I could not work for one month; I had numerous times to learn new things. I was choosing making healthy food for since in my future life, it would be necessary because I can protect my family or my children from unhealthy life style. I use to make various healthy foods, and nowadays that I have busy time I can cook healthy food in the short time. Had I have not this opportunity to learn new tasty healthy foods, I would have ruined my life with my unhealthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2498.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49010989011 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.12148847511 2.67179642975 304% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518681318681 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.5255801753 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.608695652 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188544038047 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677305273882 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656792211884 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129366713797 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709418364173 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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