In today's intricate world, people spend most of their time at the university or work. They have little leisure time and usually do not know how to utilize the limited free time they find during their day. There are diversified opinions on the best strategy people can use to spend their free time productively. Even though some people think cooking is the best option, some other people ascribe the most conducive method to learning hand-made works. There is a third group with whom I comply holding the idea that doing exercise and playing a new sport is the best thing that people can do with their free time. In what follows, I will delve into the most persuasive reasons to substantiate my perspective.
Without a doubt, the most consequential reason corroborating my stance on this subject is that not only does doing exercise on a daily basis increase people's mental health, but it also provides them with physical health. To be more specific, by doing exercise and trying new sports, people are able to mitigate their anxiety and stress and unwind from their daily difficulties. Moreover, nowadays, obesity, which stems from a sedentary lifestyle and eating junk foods, has become prevalent. The more exercise people do, the more they become unlikely to suffer from physical illnesses in the near future. Therefore, this reason manifests that doing sports is a key factor contributing to maintaining physical and mental health and the most fruitful way to spend free time.
Although the previous reason is the first one crossing the mind at first glance, another remarkable point deserving some words here is that when trying a new sport, people can improve their skills and meet new friends. For example, recently, I started to play football every other day. Before that, I only play sports that assist me in improving my intellectual ability, like chess. I have improved my teamwork capability, strategy, and fighting for team triumph by starting a team-based sport. Above that, I have found so many new friends. Had I not begun this new sport, I would neither cultivate these new skills in myself nor find new friends. Thus, this point illustrates the fact that doing new sports has many promising fruits and is the best way for people to enjoy their free time.
To make the long story short, the foregoing points lead us to conclude that when it comes to what people should do with their free time, regular exercise and playing a new sport is the best decision they can make.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, third, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90070921986 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45098830984 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534278959811 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1760391473 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.105263158 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235106968714 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744376006295 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531088939457 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1471829374 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478904141625 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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