Nowadays, people are busy with many things. If you were given a short period of time, what would you choose:
1. learn to play a new sport you never played;
2. learn to cook food in a different way
3. learn to do some hand-made work like clothes.
Nowadays, since the life pace is becoming increasingly rapid, how to spend the spare time often raises a debate. Aminority of people hold that people should choose to learn to do some hand-made work.I, however, want to learn to play a new sports if I am asked to mak e a choice.
First, learning a new sport help us keep fit. Nowadays, as people are facted with more pressure in their life, they often don't have enough time to do sports, thus causing people's immune system to become weaker. However, it is common knowledge that health is of great important for everyone. Providing that you are given a short vacation, you would better utilize it to learn a new sport, and become stronger by doing exercise. The researchers in China Academy of Social Science recently have conducted a survey about the relation between people's health and their willingness to do sports. According to the report, people who often participating in any sports are 34.7% less likely to get sick.
Second, learning a new sports help us making new friends. Doing sports definitely means that you need to play with others no matter what kind of sports you learn. Providing that you are playing basketball or football, you will need to cooperate with yopur teammates. Even if you are doing sports that can be done by oneself like jogging and swimming, you can meet many other people who share your hobby, and very likely, you may make firend with them.For example, my father is a pingpang fans. Evert time he has a spare time, like the vacation and weekend, he may go to the pingpang field and play with others there. After playing together for a few times, my father and some people in the pingpang field become good friends.
Admittedly, learing to cook food in a different way may be a good idea for people who like food and cooking to have fun and enjoy a good time. Learning to do some hand-made work, what's more, is also a appropriate choice for people since they can improve their ability to make clothes. However, these two choices are designed for only a small part of people since not everyone like cooking or doing artifacts. Learning to play a new sports is still the best way more most people to spend their spare time.
In brief,I advance that people would better learn to play a new sports because it benefits people physically and help people enlarge their social circle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...oose to learn to do some hand-made work.I, however, want to learn to play a new s...
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sport'?
Suggestion: sport
...I, however, want to learn to play a new sports if I am asked to mak e a choice. Fir...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...more pressure in their life, they often dont have enough time to do sports, thus cau...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
... Second, learning a new sports help us making new friends. Doing sports definitely me...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y likely, you may make firend with them.For example, my father is a pingpang fans. ...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ds. Admittedly, learing to cook food in a different way may be a good idea for people who like ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...me. Learning to do some hand-made work, whats more, is also a appropriate choice for ...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ome hand-made work, whats more, is also a appropriate choice for people since the...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sport'?
Suggestion: sport
...doing artifacts. Learning to play a new sports is still the best way more most people ...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'most' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: most
...play a new sports is still the best way more most people to spend their spare time. In...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...e to spend their spare time. In brief,I advance that people would better learn ...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sport'?
Suggestion: sport
...people would better learn to play a new sports because it benefits people physically a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, thus, for example, in brief, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69304556355 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33021719704 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513189448441 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9465566149 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48092562402 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152550147994 0.076458572812 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995359168701 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26947366894 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531435613871 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.