Nowadays we can get much information from a lot of different ways. There is a public debate that if a person wants to be well-informed, he or she must get information from kinds of news sources. To be honest, I do not think this is a good way to be well-informed. I will give my reasons for my support in the following passages.
Nowadays we can get much information from a lot of different ways. There is a public debate that if a person wants to be well-informed, he or she must get information from kinds of news sources. To be honest, I do not think this is a good way to be well-informed. I will give my reasons for my support in the following passages.
First, internet is such a great invention that you can almost acquire any information from it. In the 21th century, everyone has his or her mobile-phone or computer or iPad, and so on. People can get news all over the word as soon as he scan the internet. Let's assume a person wants to read news from USA, he can get it as soon as he wake up in the morning. My grandfather is 80 years old, and he always wants to know what's happening in China, sometimes even in the world. At first, he read newspapers every morning, but he had to buy at least 10 different newspaper. It is not a easy work for a old man. Later, I bought a iPad for him, and now he will get the news easily.
Second, if a person wants to be well-informed, it will be difficult to get the goal only by reading news. As the saying, "knowledge is power", so a person should read all kinds of books rather than news. Nowadays there is too much knowledge we should know. If a person only read news every day, how could he become well-informed? Mr. Zhang is teacher in my village school, he has taught Chinese for almost 30 years, and he will read news from newspapers in his spare time every day. He does not have much time to read many books, so all he know is news things in the world. But you cannot say he is well-informed. To sum it up, a person cannot be well-formed only by reading news.
Third, we all know that a person can know much about a country's good and bad things by reading histories, and he will know how to judge a piece of music is good or bad by reading music books, and he will become more and more smarter by reading mathematics books. As a consequence, he become well-informed. Let's assume a person who has much time to read all kinds of books during his or her spare time, and he can think about the books, at last he get something belongs to him or her. There is no doubt that reading all kinds of books is good for you to be well-informed.
To sum it up, a person will be well-informed by reading all kinds books and thinking about the books frequently only from the internet. Isn't that easy and convenient?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...or iPad, and so on. People can get news all over the word as soon as he scan the internet. Lets a...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'scans'.
Suggestion: scans
...et news all over the word as soon as he scan the internet. Lets assume a person want...
^^^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...e word as soon as he scan the internet. Lets assume a person wants to read news from...
^^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wakes'.
Suggestion: wakes
...s from USA, he can get it as soon as he wake up in the morning. My grandfather is 80...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... years old, and he always wants to know whats happening in China, sometimes even in t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...least 10 different newspaper. It is not a easy work for a old man. Later, I bough...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nt newspaper. It is not a easy work for a old man. Later, I bought a iPad for him...
^
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...much time to read many books, so all he know is news things in the world. But you ca...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
...usic books, and he will become more and more smarter by reading mathematics books. As a cons...
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Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...a consequence, he become well-informed. Lets assume a person who has much time to re...
^^^^
Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...e can think about the books, at last he get something belongs to him or her. There ...
^^^
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...ooks frequently only from the internet. Isnt that easy and convenient?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, well, at least, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25751072961 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62444509555 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409871244635 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7806950854 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3076923077 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26923076923 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439024839716 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146138753981 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142957049119 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318429756562 0.150856017488 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204539014882 0.0645574589148 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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