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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Sometimes we are assigned to work in a group on a project. The group will be helped more by a person who will be willing to do what other group members want than by a person who often strongly insists that things should be done in a way that is different from what the group wants to do.

Group work is great importance of the society, because group work has higher efficiency than personal work. One of the most important factors is group member. So it is brought to a heated debate which kinds of people are conducive to the group. From my perspective, dissident people are better than obedient people, because the people who are dissident can provide different ideas and can be more likely to find the problems in the group.

First of all, the dissident people can dope out the different concepts. In some group projects,
First, people with different opinions can come up with different ideas. In group work, it's important to have as many ideas as possible. Take my sister's example. In her work group, the people her team leader chooses are people who can say their own inner thoughts. Every time they discuss a project, they will not be afraid, because there will be a solution that is appropriate. So every month their group is always rewarded.

Second, when people with different opinions say their inner voice, they have a greater chance of finding problems. As the saying goes, details determine success or failure, and often those small problems will make previous efforts fall short. If a team has only hard-working people, but the team goes to the wrong path cannot be found. So you can tell which team the inner person plays an important role in.

Admittedly, in a team, there are not only people who can give opinions, but also people who can obey orders. If everyone wants to work according to their own ideas, the team will be difficult to implement. But the person who gives the opinion can make a team progress. So it's better for the team.

Generally speaking, in a team, people who can give opinions are very important. They can not only put forward different ideas, but also point out the mistakes in the team, so as to make the team work more smoothly, more efficiently and bring greater benefits.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, as to, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38492331353 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498507462687 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4431829734 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256246893796 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851357708617 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618910940258 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143061239069 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774912873449 0.0645574589148 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, as to, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments