At one high school, more of the student than ever before have been caught cheating on their homework assignments. For example, many students have asked other students to provide with them with the answers for the assignments. The school is c

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At one high school, more of the student than ever before have been caught cheating on their homework

assignments. For example, many students have asked other students to provide with them with the

answers for the assignments. The school is considering making a change to help decrease the number of

the students who cheat on home works. Which one of the following actions do you think will be most

effective and why?

-asking parents to monitor their children as they do their homework and confirm that they children have

not cheat

-increasing the penalty for cheating

-asking teachers to create home works assignments that will make difficult for the students to cheat

Education plays a vital role in every society. when students have

inappropriate behavior including cheating on their assignments in the

school it may have an adverse effect on the students’ mind, in the long

run on the society. To prevent such an unsuitable behavior, there are

many various approaches. Certainly, it is the harmonious blending of all

of these elements that is improve their circumstance. Depending on the

people’s idea, they may prefer an action. In my opinion, more emphasis

should be placed on asking teachers to create challenging homework

assignments. In what follows, I will explicate two of the most outstanding

reasons to shed light on my standing point.

To begin with, the first reason to be mention is that when asking

questions in students’ assignments become more difficult students were

forced to make groups and to think with each other in order to find a

solution for their problems. my experience is a compelling example what

I mean. While I was studying at the university, my friends and I took a

course which had a strict professor. He asked us to solve hard problems.

At first, I tried to find a way such as cheating to find solutions. but it didn’t

work. also, my friends wanted to do so, and they aren’t able too. Then,

we made a major decision and scheduled time to solve problems in

groups. Eventually, I did the best and had a perfect score. Severe

problems will not only avoid cheating, but students will also learn team

works.

Another equally important point is that challenging problems lead

students to become more innovative and to think correctly. during

solving hard problems, some simple questions come to mind that causes

creativity. In other words, students see the hard side of issues which

keep them to think correctly and innovatingly. The severe problem

should be kind of practice for students’ minds. For instance, in the

previous example that I mention. Firstly, during the solving problem, my

friend and I thought that they are very challenging and we were not able

to find a solution. After awards, one thing that was helpful for us to do

better was that we ask simple question ourselves and answered them.

Therefore, we solved troubles easier than before. The difficult troubles

impact directly on minds.

All in all, all the enumerated reasons converge to the point that asking

difficult problem from students seems to be more practical action in

order to prevent cheating. it is because it makes students to be more

innovative and to work with each other.

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...d side of issues which keep them to think correctly and innovatingly....
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...ide of issues which keep them to think correctly and innovatingly. Th...
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... issues which keep them to think correctly and innovatingly. The seve...
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...hich keep them to think correctly and innovatingly. The severe problem...
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...hink correctly and innovatingly. The severe problem should be kind of ...
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...rrectly and innovatingly. The severe problem should be kind of practic...
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...The severe problem should be kind of practice for students' minds...
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...roblem should be kind of practice for students' minds. For instan...
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... Firstly, during the solving problem, my friend and I thought that they are very ...
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...re very challenging and we were not able to find a solution. After awards, one t...
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...ery challenging and we were not able to find a solution. After awards, one thi...
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...that asking difficult problem from students seems to be more practical...
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...ng difficult problem from students seems to be more practical action ...
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...nt cheating. it is because it makes students to be more innovative and to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, i mean, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2224824356 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8380983129 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.599310832 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6428571429 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 37.0 4.53405017921 816% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 185.0 5.5376344086 3341% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289969752337 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590711736616 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074254404792 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581430397659 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561327489855 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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