The contradiction will always arise whenever the government's decisions are conducted regarding the problem of the adult's education.
In the recent years,there is a voice that the government should have offered the courses to adults over the age of 25 for improving their specific skills. Some people agree on this idea because they believe this measure can help people catch up the development of the society. However, this method has a series of issues which shall be emphasized. In my view, it is a useless way.
Firstly,the emphasis shall be placed on what has been suggested in the famous saying "Interest is the best teacher".
Secondly,interest can helps people learn efficiently and accomplish a better result.
Thirdly,interest is regarded as the first step towards one's success. Therefore, it is not the government's responsibility to spend money on the adult's education.
Those, who want to get the novel skills and accumulate the unknown knowledge,can pay for those courses by themselves. Moreover,if the government allocates the educational resource to people,it is hard to be efficient because the needs of different persons are unclear. Only through one market economic method,the resource allocation process can become more efficiency.
Furthermore,few of adults have the energy to engage in these courses. In today's society,modern citizens have endless matters and huge pressures. Early in the morning,they have to struggle out of the bed,just to catch the buses to the office. A short mid break only allows them to take a simple lunch, which may include some unhealthy food like KFC. After a tiring working day,they need to return home and spend the free time with their children and parents. Evidently,urban people is hard to spend time on these training courses,and usually they use their free time with their family and friends,which can help them reduce the pressure of working.
In my view, the government can encourage people to learn new technologies in the 8-hours works environment, and the government can make the related laws and the regulations to limit the working time, and then, the workers can obtain more time to be used by themselves. If people has enough free time, I believe that some of them are willing to learn new things which can improve themselves. Furthermore, it will form a positive circle because the advanced skills will help people work efficiently. This is a better method than just spending money on adult’s education.
In fact, there are more side effects lying under the suggestion of spending money on adult’s courses. The government shall use other methods to give ordinary people more opportunities in learning.
after all, people is willing to receive new things if they have enough energy and time. It is known that no one denys that learning, and more useful knowledges can pave the way to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, after all, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14166666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83695964723 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514583333333 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3834401453 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.72 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.12 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164722933711 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481788407081 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047354320828 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077298158999 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483809206892 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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