Opinions of celebrities
In the contemporary world, we have surounded by a lot of new thecnologies by which the famous people are making openinons about politics, social and global events. So important is for us, that to know for what people their statements are valuable. Hence the controvercial question which arises here is that whether the
younger or older people are following celebrities' opinions. As far as I am concerned, I belevie that the it woulb be more important for youngers than olders. I elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first reason I want to point out is that the older people have more experiences. It would be an asset for anyone to have experiences and be able to use it in the approprite way. These people that came over many issues in their lives are able to not thing emotionally, so, they always lestin analycally to what the opinioins of celebrities are. Moreover, imeressing by the welth and fame of celebrities, younger people tend to pay more attention to their manners and suggestions about any issue. Take my experince as an example, when I was a teenager, I was a big fan of Enrique Iglasias, so any though ha had, I wanted to have it just because I imagen him as a successful person. This point I said, always give me a sence of lake of enough experince.
Second, not only have not the youth people experince enough but also, they are enthuthiastic to be famous in any way in the future. This interting to be a successful person make them to dream a lot. Hence, when a celebritie is claiming about a subject, indeed the young person is seeing him/herself that are rendering a opinions instead of that famous person, so these young people affected more by famous people. In addition, for most of the younger individuals always there is a role model among actors, musicions and etc. they always is touching with their products. Hence, the younger people unconcioslly choose the opinioins of these people because they are familiar to them and also they are role models. Had I have a new chance to live from my young ages, I would not have gone in the ways celebrities were suggesting.
In conclusion, should you want to know wheter the younger or older people think that the opinion of celebrities are valable, I have to say you that for the reasons of lacking experince and also, making famous people as a role model, the youngers tend to listen carefuly what the opinion of celebrieis is. All in all, the youngers are those that dream every day and live in their dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, moreover, second, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68397291196 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6774064535 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480812641084 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3596719673 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120963161261 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311681042654 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615723702298 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794958301649 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683110205001 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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