Parents are the best teacher
Most important person in any children’s point of view is their parents. Yes, I am totally agree with the assertion that parents are the best teacher. There may be lots of reason why they are best. So, I would like to cover as much as point I can. Parents are always teach their children in any forms of situation.
First, They teach their children about practical life. School teacher or any kind of teacher can gives children to only direction. But Parents share their feeling, life experience, their childhood memories with them and try to shape their children. For example, If some child failed in any examination than parents plays an important role to teach them this failure is one of the step of their success. This kind of moral help provides only by parents.
Second, Parents are the best friend of their children. Children always talk like parents are their friends. They share their feelings, emotions to them. So, parents can easily understand their situation. Parents had always faced that kind of situation in their childhood and try to solve that problem. Parents are emotionally connected to children which means a lot for them.
There are always two sides of any coin. Parenting is also like that. Although parents are best friend of their, but there are also some parents which expect a lot from their children in any and how. There are lots of example of this kinds of parents which fullfill their goal through their children without knowing what they want to do in their life. This is an important point for any parents that all children are not same. Each child has different potential with different characteristics. This might be dark side of parenting which hurt a lot to their children.
One of the great thing which parents have their experience. Experience is more important than any kind of education. This experience helps their children to shape. Parents have to always share their experience to their children. This experience helps to learn how to face any kind of problem to children. Children always learn what they see, what they hear, how they feel from their parents. So, in my view, Parents are the best teacher.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...iew is their parents. Yes, I am totally agree with the assertion that parents are the...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...much as point I can. Parents are always teach their children in any forms of situatio...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...hool teacher or any kind of teacher can gives children to only direction. But Parents...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y and how. There are lots of example of this kinds of parents which fullfill their g...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256594724221 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.139088729017 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0479616306954 0.0866891130778 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503597122302 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0911270983213 0.0685040099705 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112709832134 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.00959232613909 0.0351676179071 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.42367649231 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359712230216 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0791366906475 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143884892086 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0287769784173 0.0139019557991 207% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2158.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84823848238 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281842818428 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235772357724 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165311653117 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0975609756098 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42367649231 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436314363144 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.014976366 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.3 20.5533526081 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4456711026 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9333333333 120.699889404 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3 20.5533526081 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 35.8772357724 45.7405998639 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.35042735043 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299989770744 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10182567537 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101619795733 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452910037999 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136032085247 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125105866837 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158278035362 0.0781384742642 203% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.439948260165 0.336927656856 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0572651563547 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240984715416 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902618193926 0.0618886996521 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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