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Parents are important people in our lives. What do you think are the important qualities of a good parent?
Use specific details and examples in your response.

No one can deny the fact that our parents are the integral part of our life. We can not imagine our life without them. In the given scenario, it is perceived that as gurdian are the significant member of our life, what attributes are essential to be a good one. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly parents have numerous quality ingrained in them however there are handful of attributes that are vital to be a superior one. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.

To commence with, no body can love and support you as your parent do. However, your friends and relatives could yet they are not beyond taht you obtain from your father and mother. Indeed, a good parent will love and support you unconditionally no matter whatever the situation. Drawing from my own experience, last month my mom was in a trip and I was at home. Owing to the cold, I caught by fever, not a extreme one though. As soon as my mother got to know she immediately cancelled her tour and reached me instantly. Needless to say, nothing can be compared to mother's love. Furthermore, she has supported me in every crucial decision of mine so far although there were many against me. Thus, no doubt she is a super mom for me and I urge to have this quality in every parents.

Secondly, there are times in life when you want someone to be by your side regardless of any situation you are passing through. If you share your issues with your dear ones then they will approach you to comfort with emotional support which is appreciative. Yet, your parents are the only people who can feel you without having to speak. To be more precise, they have the caliber to understand your feeling and confer you support even if you are not in need. I myself is a compelling evidence of this. My parents understand me whether I am in happy or bad mood without saying a single word. Not only this, they are always by side my side in whatever state I am in be it low mood, content or feel like crying. Therefore, in every second they proved themself to be best parent and I wish every body would with parents like I do.

All things considered, despite the fact that there are numerous superior traits found in a good parent, I believe unconditional love and support as well empathy are the top ones. Hence, we should be grateful to our parents today and always.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
...ity ingrained in them however there are handful of attributes that are vital to be a su...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...equent paragraphs. To commence with, no body can love and support you as your parent...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing to the cold, I caught by fever, not a extreme one though. As soon as my mothe...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mother'.
Suggestion: mother
...less to say, nothing can be compared to mothers love. Furthermore, she has supported me...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... any situation you are passing through. If you share your issues with your dear on...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ld be grateful to our parents today and always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, i feel, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47816091954 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48845026616 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524137931034 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3953612388 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227825188024 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679759964323 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597686540359 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141614410487 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224819692875 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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