Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that parents are the best teacher for their children. Others say that there are a lot of great teachers who can teach their children. I agree with the former with two elaborated reasons below.
First, parents can teach their children regardless of location. Most students spend almost one-third of their time at school. However, they spend their other time at home, with their parents. Therefore, most parents have more time to teach their children compared to their teachers at the school. In addition, for infants and young kids who cannot go to school, their parents are the only teacher for their education. For example, there is the term ‘babsangmuri-gyoyuk’ in Korea which can be translated as ‘education in front of dining table’. That term implies educations which are given to children by their parents at home. Those educations include not only academic contents but also social manners such as politeness and a humble mind. By conducting this education, people in Korea can pass down their original lifestyle which is inherited from their ancestors to their children. Also, by having this kind of learning, the children can learn how to live without problems in Korea.
Second, parents are the closest people to their children. Therefore, they can give adequate advice to their children. Even if a close friend of someone gives some advice on some problem, that might not work. However, people tend to sincerely listen to their parents’ advice since they developed a genuine connection between them. Hence, a deeper understanding of someone as their parents can help to give better advice than others. To be specific, my sister used to draw pictures. She was extremely into that so that she decided to go to art college. However, my father did not agree with my sisters’ plan about her academic path. Due to his experience that most people who graduate the art school easily become unemployed. He persuaded my sister. With his understanding that she also prefers Chinese study, he finally successfully convinced her. Now my sister is in her university studying Chinese interpretation. The genuine understanding of my father saved her from being unemployed.
In conclusion, most parents can teach their children many subjects which cannot be learned at school with their genuine and deep understanding about the personalities of their children. Therefore, I insist that parents are the best teachers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19240506329 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81028623107 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2218885308 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1071428571 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925298679885 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355483703975 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494775836397 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843891474203 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457864554599 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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